A different sorta poem
till now we have written poems just extolling people..i thought why not do the reverse..just wrote one which could be used to send it to a person who torments you like anything..
here it goes..
I dread the moment i sleep
coz that is when you torment me,
i dread the moment i am besides you
coz that is when you make me lose my self,
Your Ogling grin could send shivers
down the spine of even the most brave hearted men ,
if you were a slipper i would like to be a shoe ,
so that ,at least that will keep us seperated,
The mere idea of taking you out,
is enough to churn my stomach ,
The price of cotton candy is 5 Rs,
But if you eat half and give then it is worth peanuts,
I daren't go to Horror movies
as your mere presence is enough ,
You always relieve me of my burden
By reducing the weight of my purse ,
God created some intelligent men/women(whichever suits you),
wish I had been one ,before meeting you
here it goes..
I dread the moment i sleep
coz that is when you torment me,
i dread the moment i am besides you
coz that is when you make me lose my self,
Your Ogling grin could send shivers
down the spine of even the most brave hearted men ,
if you were a slipper i would like to be a shoe ,
so that ,at least that will keep us seperated,
The mere idea of taking you out,
is enough to churn my stomach ,
The price of cotton candy is 5 Rs,
But if you eat half and give then it is worth peanuts,
I daren't go to Horror movies
as your mere presence is enough ,
You always relieve me of my burden
By reducing the weight of my purse ,
God created some intelligent men/women(whichever suits you),
wish I had been one ,before meeting you
Comments
Btw..did we meet at the blogger's meet.
was luking fr a write up frm u...
But if you eat half and give then it is worth peanuts"
u cant resist this,can u?oh god.....!!here after a long time hari,seem like a lotta changes :)
Haripi-there was a reason we called you whatever we did in school-STOP justifying it
if u have the balls to write something, write it with your name, not like some f**king coward called as anonym..besides if u have noticed the poem it is gender insensitive..so stop acting as a big bro... and mind you i have enuf sensitivities, i write some for fun and some topics which we guyz discuss..so whats your problem??
But if you eat half and give then it is worth"
recalls the lines from the song
of "kadhalan" film,
prabhudeva and nagma.
not pointing at you sathya but just making my point..anyways i am happy that ppl can immediately point to the correlation..
I dread the moment you log in
coz that is when you 'harry' the cyber-geek,
i dread the moment you start blogging
coz that is when you lose your self,
Your overdose of gibberish could send shivers
down the spine of even the most ball-ed men ,
if you were a slipper i would like to be a shoe ,
cos if i had to run away, could be faster than you...
The price of cotton candy is 5 Rs,
But the eye candy on your homepage- priceless,
I stopped watching Horror movies
'cos they are just a click away at haripi2.blogspot.com ,
You always relieve me of a burden if any,
By letting me know with conviction that man could be stupider,
God created some intelligent men/women/gay/bi-s (whichever suits you),
wish you had been one, before starting this blogspot!
u say its a stupid poem and yet to try to fit in your words using the same one..isn't it ironical??i guess u r the first guy in this world to have taken your time out to vilify me..anyways i am not bothered..i know the poem sucks..but who carez..its my blog and i can write whatever i want to..u dont like it..thats okay with me..i dont write for others i write what i want to write..and i dont take orders..u carve your destiny and not others..i am not saying this because u r trying to pull me down, but it seems so immature and lemme tell u i am least bothered..if u tht u got me irritated i am sorry i am not and i dont care a shit what others have to say abt my style of writing..self introspect and think whether it serves any purpose??if u think u can put an end to whatever i write,i am sorry i cant..this is my blog and not yours..so i am the deciding authority..if there were a debate and u write such stuff then its okay but for such trivial issues, dude height of joblessness i guess..
2.Are u trying to convince us or your highly confused self that it is your blog?
3.Try a pinch of salt with comments, next time on.
i am taking it with a pinch of salt, i am being objective..
it is of course my blog and nobody can lay claims to it..and i would suggest u first go and check what a blog is..and when u r fawning on somebody i wud appreciate if u reveal your identity ..that takes a lot of character to do that..u call a spade a spade that is okay but identify yourself.. not with a anonymous tag.. that hurts teh credibility of your statement..and if u were from the society u cud have very well told the flaws rather than trying to come up with your own versikon of a poem vilyfying me..i dont care a damn abt what you write but to really get across the point u want to make i wud suggest you first identify yourself and make a honest statement..dude i swear i am one of the most objective guyz..and if your comments are honest then we can spark in a debate else..i am not willing to waste my time